'Ignite presentation learner response'

 1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. 

Research- 1
music video/ magazine concept-3
language: terminology and theory-3
representations-2
audience and industry-2
delivery-2
total out of 30- 13 
WWW & EBI:
-really interesting genre- need to check if it will fit the mainstream genre.
-Good knowledge of the genre and original artist
-context/props may need some charges-weapons are a problem! Think about this when you develop your planning. 
-some good points about lighting and camerawork.
-Do you mean jump cuts or fast paced editing?
-Interesting ideas for music magazine but again you need to make sure it meets the brief.
-Audience- you can't target everyone ! Need to check the brie and develop this for your statement of intent
-Nike shoe sponsor works but need to think about audience and brief in more detail.
-Delivery loud and confident clear speaking. Just needed more rehearsal and less text on slides.
Q&A:
 First question on psychographics - answer shows a lack of knowledge of audience terminology which is something to revise for statements of intent 
Lack of theory in presentation also show this.


2) Use this feedback, comments from peers and your own reflection on your presentation to self-assess and write your own detailed WWW and EBI for your coursework concept and presentation as a whole.
www: good song as you can argue why the artist might be a mainstream artist 

ebi: unrealistic targeting everyone 



3) Write a paragraph discussing how your presentation will lead into your actual coursework production. Do you need to update your statement of intent? Does your concept offer enough clarity? Is it appropriate for the audience specified in the brief? Is it achievable to film with the resources you have available? Can you add media terminology or theory to your statement of intent now you have reflected on your presentation and seen others? 


my presentation leads to my actual coursework because I will have a brief idea of what to do. I do need to change my statement of intent because the target audience has changed. This concept does include clarity as they will be intrigued as viewers because no everybody listens to international music.








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