Cinematography feedback and learner response

Teacher feedback:

WWW:
-excellent production -meets the brief, narrative works very well, genuinely entertaining!
-Labels were pretty accurate throughout (even POV weirdo pan I could see what you were doing) Really liked the creative twist.
EBI:
-Sound faded in and out in places. 

Feedback from classmates:

WWW:

Accurate angles. + good angles

WWW:

Good camera work, Camera shots +editing

WWW:

Accurate shots, funny narrative, POV shots were great.

WWW:

Wonderful variety of camera shots, love narrative

EBI:

could use tilt and maybe more closeups?, Medium shots was more like a closeup 

WWW:

Obaida wearing the face mask

EBI:

POV of weirdo 

WWW: Great narrative, angles , correct labels.

WWW: Great acting, funny captions

EBI: wearing mask in 2023

WWW: Entertaining, Good actions, good camera angles.

EBI: Medium close up was supposed to be a closeup, Some angles could have been labelled differently 

WWW:

Good shots and angle, good narrative

EBI:

Some angles  could be labelled differently. 

WWW:

Variety of camera shots, good acting

EBI:

some of the shots could have been labelled differently 

WWW: good editing, angles were great. 

 Reflection:

In my opinion this practical task was my best practical task. The particular reason for this is because most of my labelling of the clips were correct or not that incorrect. Furthermore the way that it was only one minute but everyone knew the narrative due to the structure of the script and the use of angles like high angles to assert dominance and low angles to suggest that something is a minority.

WWW: Good use of angles+ good editing + attention to small details 

EBI: Labels may be incorrect + some props used may not be up to date + background noise needs to be either muted fully or not.

Learner response: 

What will you do differently when you start the coursework in the summer?
I will make sure that the noise in my final product would either seamer out and not immediately go out and then come back in.
 What tips or tricks have you learned from others that you can use next time?
To fill the whole frame out unless you are trying to create suspense or something like that. If not then more than half of the frame is wasted.
 Are there any specific aspects of camerawork that you need to revise or practice?
Yes maybe some confusion with medium angles and close up angles.






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