'Ignite presentation learner response'
1) Type up your feedback in full including the ratings out of five for each of the categories. Research- 1 music video/ magazine concept- 3 language: terminology and theory -3 representations- 2 audience and industry- 2 delivery- 2 total out of 30- 13 WWW & EBI: -really interesting genre- need to check if it will fit the mainstream genre. -Good knowledge of the genre and original artist -context/props may need some charges-weapons are a problem! Think about this when you develop your planning. -some good points about lighting and camerawork. -Do you mean jump cuts or fast paced editing? -Interesting ideas for music magazine but again you need to make sure it meets the brief. -Audience- you can't target everyone ! Need to check the brie and develop this for your statement of intent -Nike shoe sponsor works but need to think about audience and brief in more detail. -Delivery loud and confident clear speaking. Just needed more rehearsal and less text on slides. Q&A: